What is the most important animal in your country?
Why is the animal important?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
一看到這種題目 當下第一個想法是 想寫 台灣黑熊!
可是 接著想第二、三段
糟了 沒辦法寫....
特徵只想的到 胸前的V
所以老師建議我們 不要管題目寫什麼
找個 你懂最多的動物來寫
這樣才有東西寫~
反正 改題老師也不住台灣 所以 瞎掰是OK的
另一個重點是:
先草稿 頭 尾 再來才寫中間!!!
(我這篇有被PO出來ㄝ 感動!!)
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The most important animal in my country would definitely be "buffaloes".
in Eastern country, buffaloes are often bred to produce milk or just bred as livestock.
However, in my country, buffaloes have some historical status.
First and foremost, in ancient times, farmers depended buffaloes not only on producing milk but also on plowing in the farmland.
buffaloes are very hard-working, persevering and loyal. They helped farmers day by day until they became old and weak.
Farmers would sell the old and weak buffaloes to butchers.
Butchers would value a buffalo on two items, one is weight, and the other one is how much weight of loads it can pull.
Although buffaloes were old and weak, they still pulled the loads with great effort, they knew it would be the last thing they could do for farmers.
In most times, farmers shed some tears when seeing them using their whole energy to pull the loads.
So, as the reason, farmers do not eat beef, instead, they appreciated the efforts they made.
As time goes by, this persevering behavior has become a characteristic of buffaloes, so more and more people do not eat them.
The second reason is, in old times, it was said that the buffalo was ridden by Buddha (on of Gods in my country) as its horse.
Buddha helps people who are injured or have a serious fever.
It is said that the drop of saliva can cure all the diseases; hence people viewed buffaloes as a very noble and sacred animal.
Now, buffaloes represent a spirit of hard-work, perseverance, loyalty, nobility, sacredness.
Farmers do not eat beef because of their contribution in the farmland.
People who are in religious in Buddhist do not eat them as well in virtue of respect to Buddha.
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